Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, September 3, 2019
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In writing we have been making persasive arguments i did mine on why we should have PE. i have gone back and checked my gramer punctiuation so i think i have done very well. please tell me what you think and make shore to look at the other two post's leading up to this. do you like PE?.
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You have some great reasons why PE is good for you, we should get together and make a few changes around the spelling and some of the words you used to make it every better.
ReplyDeletemum maby you can also do better on where you place you'r words because you are placing writing them and it dosn't make sence.
DeleteWow, just wow!
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