Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
Scary snake
This is my favourite and best piece of writing I have done for literacy. My teachers said it was one of the best ones that day. And it made me very happy. The writing I did is called suspense writing if you have read the goosebumps books you might know what it is. But suspense writing is short sentences, unanswered questions and stuff like that. I would love to see a piece of writing by you. See you next time.
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Hi Ajay, you really did deserve to be used as one of the best of the day as it really is a fantastic piece of writing. I really like the way you have written a detailed blog post. Do you like reading suspense books? Mrs O
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