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Tuesday, March 12, 2019

camp recount

2 comments:

  1. Great work Ajay, I really like you description of the Animal Survival game.

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  2. Kia Ora Ajay. I liked the way you put detail into your writing. You taught me more things to add to my writing by reading your work. Next time you could add more animals or monsters. Thanks!

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