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Thursday, March 14, 2019

duathlon recount

2 comments:

  1. kia ora Ajay
    I liked the way you didn't drag your writing out and you made it ten times more interesting for the reader.
    When I read your post I liked how positive you were.
    Next time, you could edit your post in the end and show a teacher because there were multiple mistakes, great work.

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  2. that was so cool and I lernt lot of

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