Tuesday, March 12, 2019
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Hello Ajay!
ReplyDelete1. I really enjoyed how you would add a dinosaur and get it to ruin the persons time.
2. Next time could you make the person stay in the one place a little longer?
3. I like the way that you decided to create a money eating dinosaur, it was nice to see something that was creative.
Hi Catherine, I'm glad you enjoyed my slide. Thanks for your feedback I'll try to add more detail to my story.
Deletehi Ajay i really liked your slide but next time maybe you should add more slides from brock
ReplyDeleteThanks Brock, the reason I don,t have many slides is because it is not finished yet.
DeleteGreat slide Ajay and is it almost done I would love to see the end.
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper we stil have lot more slides to make till it's done but when it is i'll tell you.
Deletethat was awesome I like how you did it about a noob on roblox and added a dinos
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