Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
I'm naughty :)
In literacy we have been tasked to make a poem on one thing naughty we have done. That is not the only naughty thing I have done I have done afew more.
This poem is based on William Carlos Williams poem This is just to say.
Have you done any thing naughty? and be honest.
See you later.
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Hey Ajay, I really like you're poem and how you changed the words to make something totally funny!Im not a big fan of plums but I once ate 15 apples in a week lets just say my mum was not happy. maybe you could do another post like this or maybe on something good you have done? also when did this happen? I would really like to know more.
ReplyDelete-Addison